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star54kar ([identity profile] star54kar.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] hp_misfitfics2008-01-31 07:10 pm

Burning Day

Title: Burning Day
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Prompt: “Not all who wander are lost.” ~J.R.R. Tolkien~
Word Count: 819
Summary: Albus Dumbledore finishes writing his will, and reflects on why he has decided to leave the most personal of his gifts to Ron.
Author’s Notes: Written for the first round of prompts at [livejournal.com profile] ginger_lust Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] bramblerose4 for helping me brainstorm and an extra special thanks to [livejournal.com profile] thrihyrne for jumping in at the last minute with an emergency beta.


Burning Day

[identity profile] cuteej4.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oh I love it.

[identity profile] greenpluff-1.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
I loved it.
Toughly, well written. I never thought of Dumblendore´s point of view. But now I believe that this is how may have happened

Thanks, Shari!!!

[identity profile] hedwig5221.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 01:10 am (UTC)(link)
Brilliant!!!

Your story shows that Dumbledore understood Ron better than anyone. Great job!

[identity profile] yaakunahlove.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my Ronnie!!... even Dumbledore knew him as he really is. All heart.

If I didn't know this was 'fan fiction' I sure would have thought I read it in canon somewhere *lol*

Excellent work!!
Edited 2008-02-01 01:14 (UTC)

[identity profile] hedwigs-bane.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 01:43 am (UTC)(link)
I've always felt so robbed never seeing a real Ron and Dumbledore moment in the books. Thanks for giving us a very insightful one, as well as a beautifully described Dumbledore moment.

Great work, hon!

[identity profile] draconifers.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 02:14 am (UTC)(link)
That was amazing =)

[identity profile] amieam.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
Just perfect!!!

[identity profile] crumplehornedki.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 02:28 am (UTC)(link)
lovely missing moment

[identity profile] nakeefeet.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Amazing! What a wonderful way to see Ron.

[identity profile] elfwhistletree.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
And that is exactly how it happened ♥

[identity profile] xedra.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 04:16 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's beautiful!
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[identity profile] libgirl.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
Loved the last line! :D

[identity profile] stillicides.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 08:19 am (UTC)(link)
This is amazing.

And that is one of my favourite literary quotes.

*loves*

[identity profile] merryrose11.livejournal.com 2008-02-01 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for sharing this fiction with us star54lar. What you write sums up so nicely what I feel about Ron too. That was a lovely story and I'm sitting here at work with a happy smile and tears trickling down my face. Glad I'm alone here today. :)

[identity profile] star98hope.livejournal.com 2008-02-02 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Here via [livejournal.com profile] oncelikeshari - and I'm so glad I followed her rec! What a wonderful story, and so very well-written. That quote is one of my favorites, and fits so perfectly. I really enjoyed this. :)

[identity profile] kerosinkanister.livejournal.com 2008-02-05 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Really well done!

[identity profile] unomesowell.livejournal.com 2008-05-03 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniff*
Oh! So pretty!